Would you continue reading?

I would definitely like to read on. You did a nice job of setting up the scene by using a lot of detail. The fact that you ended it with a sort of twist (I was expecting it to be a murder rather than a suicide) kept me intrigued. I wast trying to find some grammar mistakes but really couldn't find any. The only thing I would change is the first few sentences. I would rewrite it as, "I collapsed towards the frozen ground running my shaky fingers through her golden-copper hair which laid delicately around her pale face." But that's just me. Nice Job.