Will someone good in Englilish please proof-read my letter to President Obama?

Frankly you are kidding yourself if you believe it will really matter as he will not read it anyway. I have a better idea, since I know my wages are less than those teachers in WI, how about they just pay me to stay at home the same average salary as they earn? Now would that not be fair? Heck, I would take what you receive, as I could live well on $2400 a month, Now that sounds fair to me you can live off my income and I will live off yours while you work for it.