Saturday, August 6, 2011

Can you give me your opinion on this? i was in a writing mood lol?

As we passed, I glanced out the window to see the tiny droplets of snow falling. I wanted to smile and laugh at the simple beauty unfolding in the cold winter’s day. I always loved the snow, walking through it gracefully, feeling the crunch of it beneath my feet. Today would be perfect, if only. I laid my head against the freezing window, trying not to think. I could feel the bus slowly stopping. I needed to get off. I stood, and gathered my belongings. I put one foot in front of the other as I went down the aisle. Slowly, I stepped off the steps and made contact with the concrete driveway. The snow was falling heavily now, covering the ground. I glanced up toward the house. I noticed a blue truck parked to the left side of the driveway. I tilted my head to the right. Then I saw him, standing in front of the carport, wearing a thick black coat. A smile beautiful enough to make you cry was stretched across his face. In fact, I was crying. So many memories rushed through me. The soft touch of his hand on my cheek, the faint tickle as he whispered words into my ear, and that smile. Oh God that smile. It seemed as if I was frozen in place forever, just staring at the man before me, expecting him to disappear. I dropped my things and took off into a full sprint. He stood with his arms outstretched, waiting for us to make contact. I leapt into his arms. I grabbed his neck and held on tight. He started turning in a circle, my legs swinging outward. We were dancing in the snow. He slowly stopped and brought my face close to his. He moved his mouth close to my ear, making me laugh slightly. He calmly whispered I love you. I pulled his face back to mine and pressed our noses together. I didn’t have to say anything. He knew he had stolen my heart. I pressed my lips to his. Nothing in my life had ever felt so right. That day was perfect. That day was the beginning of our lives, with everything ahead of us.

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